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Comments (Dan Mashal)

Fixed.

Thanks -- Dan 19:33, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

Comments (Feature Wrangler)

  • a mistake in a summary "and provides an provides an"
  • I'm not sure mentioning link with Linus makes a good karma (as some people could understand it as Gnome 3 offence)
  • for scope - please create a list of packages being imported to Fedora with status of how far the import is (packages, under review - with #bz etc.)
  • I'd rephrase User Experience section and use different words
  • please, provide more details in Release Notes section (does not have to be final text)
  • email address does not work

Thanks --Jaroslav 12:49, 20 July 2012 (UTC)